Saturday, March 5, 2011

STORYBOARD (REVISED VERSION)






What I've changed;
  1. No moon at the beginning.(Mr.Loni said it's not necessary)
  2. Add Graphic emotions that pops out of each character's heart. (change from head to heart)
  3. In the world of Death - The grim gives the man three choices to choose; Heaven, Hell, and Back to Earth. Three choices are inside the elevator's door.
  4. Cut down to Two Obstacles - The rope is cut and the flower is not a flower but actually grim's hand.
  5. The umbrella will not pop out of the man head anymore, it will comes out from his heart.
  6. At the end- Holding a flower, the man stands where he was before.
Important Messages in the story
  1. The Ring Box keeps coming out of the man's heart which can be represents his love. Also, to show the audience that he wants to go back.
  2. The Sand Glass keeps showing up to tell the time the man has left. Also, to tell audience that Time never stops running.
These are my Two Plots which have different endings.
First one is a twisted ending(old), and Second one is a happy ending(new)
  1. Plot (1) - A man is hit by a car while crossing the street to propose a woman, wakes up in the world of death, fights to go back to earth, able to gets back to earth but then the woman is hit by a car.
  2. Plot (2) - A man is hit by a car while crossing the street to propose a woman, wakes up in the world of death, fights to go back to earth, and finally he can revive with the power of Love.
Some Important elements
  1. Theme- For plot(1) : Sometimes life is so unfair. Plot (2): Love conquers all.
  2. Situation- The man is going to propose to woman.
  3. Conflict- The man is hit by a car.
  4. Extension- The man climbs up mountain to get the flower of resurrection.
  5. Climax- The flower is not flower but actually a grim's hand.
  6. Denouement- The man feel so desperate. The ring box comes out of his heart. The man cries. Tear drops down to the ring. Magical happens. The umbrella of "Love" comes out of his heart.
  7. Resolution- He byebye the Grim and float down to the flower. He picks the flower and goes back to earth.

***I want to hear any comments about my overall story and especially the ending.
What do you think about my two endings. Which one you think is the best fit?

Many thanks :D

Thursday, February 17, 2011

CHARACTER BIBLE















***For the Grim, I will take his little umbrella off as the story was changed.
GOOD BYE my umbrella...;(

Tuesday, February 15, 2011

CHARACTER MODELING





SCENES AND LAYOUT DESIGN












***For the Heaven scene, I will add particles on the cloud. Also, I will move the Heaven's door further away.
***For the Hell scene, I will add Fire on the Monster's head and the background.


~*w*~

Monday, February 14, 2011

ART DIRECTION

MOVIE TONE
  • Low-Key Lighting
  • Texture - Grain and Glow





BACKGROUND REFERENCES


From "The Art of Monster Inc."


A scene in Samurai Jack



CHARACTER DESIGN


*Actually, the grim sickle will be much more bigger :D

PROPS DESIGN MODELING

Well, here are some of my props modeling, take a look... :D


The Moon



The man's Umbrella




A Rose (Flower of Resurrection)




The Grim Scythe




A Sandglass





A car





A Ring Box

STEP-UP THUMBNAIL STORYBOARD







STEP-UP TREATMENT

A beautiful full moon is shining on the black empty sky. On the roof, two cats are flirting each other. Then the moon is fading out and turning out to be a ring in the man’s hand. The man looks at the ring and smiles. He is sitting in the taxi. Then, the wheels stop. The man pays the taxi fee. A driver’s white bony hand takes the money.

The man stands on the footpath. He looks at his girlfriend whom is sitting in the Coffee Shop on the opposite side of the road waiting for him. She sees him and smiles. While the man is crossing street, a car from the man right hand side coming toward him. Just about to hit the man, it stops. The man bows to apologize the car driver and continue to cross the street. Suddenly, a car from another side comes and hits him within a flash.

He wakes up with confusion on where he is. Something is popping up on his head. He touches it. It is a little umbrella. He hears some noise so he turns around. He sneaks and hides behind a rock. In front of him, every soul is queuing up to the Hell Entrance. Also, a little umbrella is on each soul’s head. He sits down with sadness. He looks at the photo of his girlfriend. He touches her face in the photo and sobs. Suddenly, a white bony finger touches the man head. The man looks up. It’s the grim. The grim gives him a cute smile. The grim points to the flower of resurrection on the mountain and touches his watch twice before he disappears.

“To start climbing, Press the button” The man looks at the words on the sandglass and presses the button. The sand falls down. The man climbs up the mountain. He has been climbing for a while. He is tired. Suddenly, two hands stick out from the mountain, catch the man’s legs and pull the man down to the ground. The man pats his bottom. Then he stands up and goes again. He climbs up but this time something is flowing down from the top. It’s oil. He slips down to the ground. He has little time left. Now, he feels paralyze. He looks up to the top. Then he sees an illusion of his girlfriend, sitting nearby the rose, and reaching out her hand to him. Now, the man feels stronger. He gathers his power and climbs up again. The sand keeps falling down. Finally he reaches to the top. He looks at the rose and smiles. He grasps the rose and pulls it up. However, the rose turns out to be the grim hand. He’s shocked. He turns around and sees that the rose is actually on another mountain. He feels so disappointed. He knocks his head down to the ground. Then he takes the ring box out. He looks at the ring. He cries. His tear touches the ring. Magical happens, his umbrella gets bigger and expands. The word, “Umbrella of LOVE” appears. Rainbow and fireworks celebrate on the sky. He can fly. The grim is shocked and get angry. The man flies to the rose on another mountain. The last sand falls down. The man grasps the rose and gets back to earth.

The man stands on the footpath before he died. He touches his body and looks around. He smiles. He close his hands tight and say YES!. He looks at his girlfriend who standing on the opposite side of the road. She smiles to him. He smiles to her. Then, A car drive passes his face. He smiles to his girlfriend again, but now she disappeared. Then he sees his girlfriend lying on the ground. A car hits her.